You And I...

The distance that's between us…

 Is now the distance within my heart…

And the silence has become so apparent…
It has completely torn me apart...

So disappointed from pure neglect…
I now admit that I've been correct…

We were never really “You and I”

I should have known right from the start…

Author's Note

self explainatory right?.... :-)

Reviews

[stars are far]

That was really so nice.. i can totally relate to this..and the title :( is for me a sad memory :( ..
thank you for sharing :)

[N!LoC]

Oh this poem has so much more behind it... Lol .. It has a story if it's own ... Thnks for reading... I love random readers that just stumble upon my stuff :-)

[stars are far]

Hehe my pleasure :)

[Lil♥Beauty♥Bunni♥]

omg you are coming from the heart
and that was way better than listening to a harp

you are a true poet

[N!LoC]

Wow thank u so much... It's gonna take 2 working days for that to set in ! Lol

[Lil♥Beauty♥Bunni♥]

Read my new poem its kinda like this but talking about someone I love its called He is my love

[Laminators Dubai]

this is beyond self explanatory friend, this is admiring the pain.

[N!LoC]

:-) :-) :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Such a sad tale of love's torment with good Rhymes. Good one N!LoC

[N!LoC]

thanks baby rico! .... "sad" is my maiden name... lol