wolves cry to me

crying wolves

When they cry they call out to me

I listen to their cries

it is the same thing

they say " My love is sad can you help?"

I nod and go with them to help

each time I am a sucsses

until now I could not help the white wolf with her trouble

her pups where ill but there was nothing I could do

Author's Note

I know it is sad but deal with it.
hope u like this

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Hey, great poem, you misspelled the word "sucsess" but other than that I like it. Have you considered adding in a rhyme scheme? That may make it flow a little better. All in all, thumbs up!

[~Beautiful Dreamer~]

VERY GOOD !!! i like it

[Starrbitt]

It is sad but creative..good poem girl! lol