my only poetry

something random i came up with in a few minutes.

my pen doesn't bleed in blue

it bleeds memories of me and you

somehow you managed to ruin me

when you became my only poetry

 

my sentence begins with you

the word I spill next is you

the spaces between are filled by you

the paragraphs end with you

 

you consume every of me

but I'm still very much lonely

i must have made a grave mistake

by making you my only poetry

 

so I throw my pen away

and i'm suddenly at loss for words

now im left with lingering thoughts

which when unwritten, hurts worse

Author's Note

i hope you like it!

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is an imaginative way to show how I feel when I read one love poem after another (my pet peeve) when all seem to sound the same!!!! But amazingly, you've come up with some creative twists (especially love 2nd paragraph with every rhyming word being "you"!) This feels like a spoof on all the whiny addicted love poems I've read, as if you stretch this situation to the limit to make me laugh! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie