A promise of love?

Very scattered series of worded emotions.

 

If I promised you a thousand whispers, a hundred dreams, and a whole heart, would you take it?
Thought my heart may not beat, you leave me breathless.. I may die, so kiss me quickly.
Take my hand, let's walk the f**k away. Another day, another memory..
An echoed 'I love you', A stolen giggle. Leave me breathless. Feed my heart.
An empty soul, filled with hope, a simple look.. Eyes thats swallow,
Steal my breath, leave me quiet, a distant smile, a stolen dream, fall into an eternity.
Never enough, too little to stray, hold on tightly, keep me near.
A simple girl, a stolen life, given to you, the rest of time..
Too little to stray, leave me breathless, all the time in the world, let me bless it.
To f**k up once, to deny my feelings, to feel so lost and unprepared to need this,
A secret whisper, a stolen heart, without a breath, I loved you from the start.
A snow covered mountain, in a day of spring.
A warm smile masquerading a night of sin
Fill my heart, feed my soul, breathe my life, I love you

 

Author's Note

a.r.w

Reviews

[Chistie]

I loved it!! It moved fast and flowed nicely!! Good job!!
I thought you did a good job setting the emotion. Like a summer love, or crush. forgotten love, past love it's really up to the person to relate to the poem. Good job!

[Bleeding Ink Anthology]

The poem is personal, the images are events you wouldnt understand because you do not know the reality of them. thanks :)

[Jane]

Very nice imagery and wording, however I don't understand some of your images. It might help to make it a bit more concrete.