Empty Shores

 

 

 

Waves crash

 

 

 

 

Against an empty shore

 

 

 

 

An Island sits inside us

 

 

 

 

Few have reached the shore

 

 

 

 

Beyond the empty shorelines

 

 

 

 

Where fear keeps us hiding

 

 

 

 

Building walls around us

 

 

 

 

 Waves crash

 

Against an empty shore

Reviews

[sandra Counts]

Like the wide spaces between the stanzas... just like waves!

[Imperfection]

I can hear, see and feel this.

Few words, great depth.
Well written.

[Erotic Goddess]

I like to think that I am out there swimming against that current to reach those places yet undiscovered, but who knows. This was a very thoughtful piece and I enjoyed the rhythm and style of the piece.

~Goddess