Broken

 

Don't no where I am

 

 Can't deny it

 

 I'm broken, I'm Beaten

 

 Where are you my friend

 

 No arms to hold on

 

 Can't keep the tears inside

 

 Can't deny it

 

 Can't pretend

 

 I'm broken, I'm beaten

 

 Fallen once again

 

 No one to see

 

 The secret part

 

 I locked up tight

 

 Do you remember

 

 When we met

 

 How you promised me

 

 We would be

 

 Forever together

 

 When we said

 

 This time it would not be

 

 Broken love for you and me

 

 The tears of joy we cried

 

 I finally found you this time

 

Do you remember

 

 The dreams we shared

 

 How you lied to me

 

 And called me yours

 

 When you said forever

 

 This time I could be sure

 

 Then left me crying

 

  Heartbeats

 

 Gone into memory

 

No Tears?

  

Reviews

[youngwriter222]

I can see you were really longing for this very special person, you expressed your emotions openly about how this person hurt you but you got through it.
Great poem

[Imperfection]

Intense feelings.
Well depicted here.

Great write.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Such a melancholic write. One that again expresses longing for that which was shared but somehow put asunder. Such poignant words, truly delicate. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Tania Leigh]

Very sad, and I agree with Serendipity, that this poem "reaches" out to the reader and speaks directly to them....very intense.

[Serendipity]

OMG, are you trying to make me cry. I feel the pain and it feels so familiar. As if I caused it to you, as if you were the one who caused it to me. Does that make sense?