Lost in the bottle of soapy free

She was lost in her little world

The shadows faded in the light of the dancing circles

Yielded by the hands of a little princess girl

 

She and her princess crown

Unseen her prince fighting dragons on the ground

 

Lost in the bottle of soapy free

Time is faded and so are the gray clouds of misery

 

The simple life or so it’s told

Where a girl and her bubbles is the only world she knows

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and the logic of the poem.
"The simple life or so it’s told
Where a girl and her bubbles is the only world she knows"
The safeness of a bubble. A prison and a safe place? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[nocool]

thanks for your input.
:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[ANTO]

No cool - I just this came first in the contest and the poem by Yanghwa Hong came second. To be honest I have to sit on the fence in the decision because I truly think it was a draw but there are no draws so I respect the difficult decision made by the contest holder.
This really captures what it is to be a child and how the simplest of items can become so enthralling and awe-inspiring - a 'skill', yes a 'skill' that many lose or tune out as they get older.
A really good write.

[nocool]

thank you very much.

[MelissaAndres]

I liked this! My favorite line is, 'Time is faded and so are the gray clouds of misery'. Simple, childhood bubbles can do so much! Loved the picture too!

[nocool]

thanks for your input.
I am very glad you liked it.

[MelissaAndres]

You are very welcome!

[reetu]

one hundred as a rating, I just loved this one because it just continued all the time well and rhymes were also good.

[nocool]

Thanks for sharing your input.