to be alone with you

I caught a one way train to the edge of your heart

I rode it to a world filled with stars

 

Reaching in the sky for a dream

I wanted to grab a star

I got so much more when I grabbed your glowing heart

 

I got lost in the song of your eyes

Where every breath you took from my kiss

Felt like a forever good-bye

I knew you were mine when I saw myself in your eyes

 

I want to touch you like the rain

A slow fall from your body

Head to toe

Following the curves of your body no one knows

Watch you smile as you go insane

 

I will give you your forever smile

Kissing your toes

Telling you all the secrets only you know

 

And when the light fades

And the eyes grow dim

I want to live in your dreams

Just so I can taste your lips again

Reviews

[R.M.C]

A really nice write... Very imaginative, really making the reader follow the words as if in a trance of their own thoughts and feelings. Your way of describing things is very thought provoking and works really well with your style of writing. well done.