To: My Little Sister [[African Gumdrop]]--->A.K.A Dreads NiyaBOO!

I see a light in you.
It's so beautiful, so rare.
You have so many abilities.
So many talents.
They're encapsulated in a wooden box.
Sealed shut.
I had a dream that me and Briona danced around your box.
Spinned, Swirled, and Twirled.
We danced so hard with so much energy, so much passion.
Red and Yellow burst from my fingertips....and Purple and Green from Briona's.
The lights grazed the box, and the seams began to crack.
I could feel your energy pressing against the box.
[[Briona felt it too..]]
We looked at eachother and began to dance harder; lights gleaming from our hearts,
Freedom bleeding from our souls.
The top of the box lifted and you rose to the sky
With rainbows pouring from your eye sockets
and sprinkles of rainbow dust falling from eye lashes.
So free. So beautiful.
[[Take our hands
We'll help.]]!!

Reviews

[The Devil's Own B***h]

Such a passion building throughout this poem. It's beautiful to see the constant incouragement that you have expressed in this poem. So so stunning!!!!!!

Well done on a brilliant piece.

Josie

[nocturnalbeast]

Dalaina- Thank u so much!!!.
Misty- U came at the most perfect time with these comments. [[really]].
I've been feeling really bad lately...and haven't felt like writing. [[That feeling is soooo gone.!]]

[Dalaina Renee]

I loved reading this! Great job!

[Kristina Moulaison]

This is so beautiful, so heartwrenching. There's a different kind of passion in this, deeper than hate or even love. I really love the voice...so wounded, yet so hopeful, yearning. The pain this speaks of could crush you, but better men find wings to rise above, this writing tells me. This is clearly written by a better man.