Peaceful Ending

Twisted spirel of love pain never ending decaying heart burning within every cell in ur body mind games never ending darkness over showdes
no way out no light of hope the 1 u loved stole the light now all thats left is empty wall's ur mind is racing searching for answers thinking of ways
to releas the pain the blade you grabe is rusted dull edges that barley cut ur skin you add force and tare ur skin blood trickels from every cutt you
feel relaxed and walk away blood falls from ur vains you grabe the towel now coverd in blood you set it down and run the water the water is
flowing and ur blood is poring you steep in the water and lay ur self down now ur blood and water is mixing it looks crismom now you close ur
eyes and think of the past ur body is numing ever so fast and within secends ur life fades away into the sweet nothingnees of death is the peaceful
way to end this endless pain

Reviews

[Evil_Angel]

This is so sad and left me kind of depressed lol, but is very well written and i can tell exactly what you are feeling inside. Theres some little spelling errors but its not a big deal probably just typos. Let me just say everyone has some bad breakups but they leave you stronger for the next relationship, that is if you dont give up. Everything happens for a reason. :)

[Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa]

This was an interesting piece. But, it isn't good to end ones life because the love you once had has faded away. I once experienced a loved lost but, I never wanted to end my life over it.

[Ani Ashford]

A very grim picture you paint here of a soul in torment. Rusty blades are not without pain - Your style even evokes the jumbled thoughts of this pain. I could feel it.