Those eyes

Those eyes

A Story by nomoontea
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Flash

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I cant tell you what it is or why. Sparks fly. It came out of nowhere and believe me when I say this never happens. Anymore. I looked at him to say hello and I got caught uo in his eyes. It was as clear as a cloudless sky, and it rumbled in me like a storm.. His eyes were caught as well, and I could tell. He felt it too. Like I said, this never happens.
The intensity scared me. Something small and fluttered in my belly, then rose and beat its wimgs against my ribs.
I had only said hello. That was it. I was flustered, just a bit. Im not bashful, but Im not bold either. I know my way around this subtlr, ( shall I say it) game. A game I gave up playing long ago. I excused myself and moved away.
While speaking to a freind I raised my eyes , and every time


there he was
All the way across the parking lot. He had moved about five feet away from a small group, and with his hands on his hips he was looking at me. He wasnt shy about it, either.
I avoided him after that til he moved away, and I kept on keeping on, but Im telling you something in me woke uo, and I was surprised it was still alive. I made a pact with myself to care for it just in case...

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Perhaps such are these microcosms, that our hearts place in a theater of fantasy (perhaps even cruelty). An erotic narration that was almost carelessly told, to weave the gnostics of the soul.
Eros is a revelation. Eros is decadence~ it has threatened to set our bluebirds free into modern fare.

Why your writing is actually wonderful, personally i think,is because it wields so much sensibility.
Cant wait to read more from you

Degare



Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nomoontea

3 Months Ago

Hi Degar. Thank you so much for your positive review. It means so much



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Perhaps such are these microcosms, that our hearts place in a theater of fantasy (perhaps even cruelty). An erotic narration that was almost carelessly told, to weave the gnostics of the soul.
Eros is a revelation. Eros is decadence~ it has threatened to set our bluebirds free into modern fare.

Why your writing is actually wonderful, personally i think,is because it wields so much sensibility.
Cant wait to read more from you

Degare



Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nomoontea

3 Months Ago

Hi Degar. Thank you so much for your positive review. It means so much

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Added on September 28, 2025
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nomoontea
nomoontea

Fernandina Beach, FL



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I want to have a space to write and be read. That's it. Chatting is good. Constructive criticism is good. But mostly just snap shots. Sometimes quotes. Sometimes like a journal. Sometimes a memoir. M.. more..