I

On the verge of losing my mind.

I live in an elucidation

in a moiety

in the middle of

a reversible nature

between shadows of

stunned truths where,

nothing and everything exists

Author's Note

The moiety consists of:
a)Nothing
b)Everything

Reviews

[Confuser]

Manal: Well that's quite a description: The character lives clearly on one side of the middle, of changes, in mind, in place, in space, is deep, then add onto that "realm" or that "state" ; now trying to understand on the side of the middle in BETWEEN shadows of shocking revelations, where nothing and everything exists. I totally agree with your description of the poem. Wow.....

[Daydreamer]

You're one of the most humble and genuine 💞 thank you to the moon and back,Dale👣🌝 Actually I am curious to have a bigger look at how you experienced this through your imagination... This was me recording my astoundments in ink.. Nothing more.. I literally have decided to divide existance of phenomenons into (1) Nothing (2) Everything .... Because I'm surrounded by the existance of exactly nothing abd everything and people trying to stop truths from reaching everybody....

[Confuser]

We can talk about it...your philosophy is quite interesting...

[Daydreamer]

Thank you so so much, inbox me anytime❤💕

[Confuser]

Manal: You're so sweet; looking at it; OMG, I think it's the first thing that came to my mind. Thought about your wonderful poem about not over-thinking; I do just that; but with this review, it's my mind's literal interpretation.

[maria ( rose)]

to answer your question : I live in an elucidation
in a moiety
in the middle of
a reversible nature..one of two equal parts : yes?
Impressive write..love reading your work!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Good write Manal Enjoyed your lines of thought

[Saddam]

Small with big presentation.
Love this expression friend.

[Daydreamer]

Many thanks to you :)

[Rana]

The last line gave the whole thing beauty. This is really meaningful, so much so that it has more than one meaningful meaning. Nothing and Everything can be like the two sides of a coin when you flip it for a toss. Nothing and Everything can also be seen as a simile for a passionate life where things either mean everything to a person or nothing, there isn't anything in between. Either get whole-heartedly into it or don't have anything to do with it. This is a lovely little piece of work, Manal!

[Daydreamer]

Awww.. THANK YOU🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷 thank you so much Rana😍😍😍😍💞💞💞💞❤️❤️❤️ These interpretations are personal and different and I liked them actually.... I am stunned at the idea (but makes for a fact almost, to me) that nothing and everything exists! I have so so so many questions I tried to express but found that stale, so I rather merged them into a single wonder process for you all to see... I appreciate you!🌹

[anne]

A small thought provoking write..good one Manal..:))

[Daydreamer]

Good to see you Anne! Thank you dear💞

[Jennie Baron]

Brief yet very effective writing and thought-provoking. Inspired! I like this one a LOT.

[Daydreamer]

so many thank you's will never be enough😱 massive thanks for your constant encouragement, support, kindness, and above all humbleness... Such an honour being praised highly by a very experienced, assertive lady💞💞 I appreciate you,Miss❤️

[Jennie Baron]

You're welcome, and you're very kind. But this was my pleasure to read. Such expert use of vocabulary!

[Daydreamer]

Arrghhhh😍😍😍😍

[Latifa]

in the middle of

a reversible nature

I can spend hours pondering in upon these two lines alone, great job

[Daydreamer]

Wooaaahh!! Flatteration at its best👌🏻😍 thank you so much for this humbleness Latifa🌹

[nazia]

Liked this little pondering of yours. We all wonder the same things at times.

[Daydreamer]

Thank you💞 exactly... But it stroke me so hard the time I wrote this! I was literally in awe though I knew slightly of that fact😐

[KWP]

Ha - great - well worthy of ponder time afterwards - yes yes yes we reside in the everywhen - very well articulated XX

[Daydreamer]

Aw.... So glad you liked it ... Your comments are boisterous😍❤️💞