Now complete!

A Jorio.

 

I was so incomplete,

Without you my love.

Now I've got you,

And became so complete.

Author's Note

A Jorio is a four lined poetry, with four words in each line.

Reviews

[Emily Pazienza]

Very romantic. I love it!

[poetic soul]

words will make the beauty of this fall short!!!
jus a smile is enuf ----

:)

Love,
Krishna

[Together]

Great!

[Laura E. Aranda]

ah, you defined what a jorio is. thanks. i think i might make up a few! cheers,lea

[Roxy]

So romantic and warm.

[Innocent]

So warm and beautiful.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh this is so deep!
brilliant work love :)