I am Faith

I am a little seed
Displayed in noble deeds.
I have the power
To tumble towers,
To part the fountain
And move the mountain.
I am the leveler
To the wine reveler.
But I myself can do nothing
Without yourself to do something.
I am the strength of mankind
That gives sight to the blind.
I am the faith, your faith and trust
Coupled with action is a must.
With you, with me, and us with the Lord
Oh what can happen with a prayerful word!

Author's Note

A little poem I found going through my writing. I don't know why I didn't post it, but I decided to now. I hope you enjoy it.

Reviews

[William Gardner]

If it's been a while, it might be wanting a rewrite. Some do once dusted off. To the wine reveler perfect, but than to contrast you can do nothing without you? I would say you left some meat on the bone there. Do you want God to appear and enable? Enable the verse to allow for him to appear. Just my thoughts

[LunarSong]

Thank you. Yeah, I feel like a lot of my poems could use a little revising. Thank you for your ideas.