Thief (better title coming)
A Book by nrshrews
A mute boy, 19 years old, steals to feed himself and his massive slum of homeless people in an unnamed city, in the time setting of the Great Depression, while also trying to find his place in life. 
© 2016 nrshrews
Author's Note
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Please dont be stupid and give me hate this is my first serious attempt at a book. However I do need some constructive criticism as I'm not really sure where to take my story yet.
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Besides some minor grammar issues, this is really good so far. Its not too intense but not boring. Its just fast enough so you want to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 9, 2016
Last Updated on January 9, 2016
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nrshrewsFayetteville, WV
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New writer, trying to learn to write a good novel. Any constructive criticism will be appreciated more..
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