Is anyone there? (FF2)

Friday Fictioneers Week 2 Drabble

              Driving up the coast road, I stop at a gas station.  I buy a Yoo-Hoo and some Twinkies for the road.  The nondescript man behind the counter says the restroom is out back.

Pushing the creaky door open reveals a dimly lit grimy bathroom.  I head to the urinal straight ahead.  Looking left, I see a crimson puddle oozing from under the back stall door. “Is that blood?” I say out loud. “Is anyone there?”  I hear some whimpering, so I open the door. I freeze at the sight as a hand violently pulls me through a portal of darkness.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Oh... that's very frightening! :0 great writing, but I probably won't be using a gas station restroom any time soon, haha!

[nseddy]

Thank you!

[Sara R.]

I felt a chill down my spine when I read this. Very frightening! Great piece!

[nseddy]

Thanks for the nice review!

[New Theory]

Sweet, scary situation. Mysterious

[nseddy]

Thanks for the review!

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)