I Can See You

A poem about paranoia

I can see you

So clearly see you

I will always see you

Don't try anything

I know where you live

I see you from the window

You can't see a thing

But I can see you

I'm watching you right now

This is the police

You're under arrest

Put your hands behind your head

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Definitely captures the paranoia. Great write.

[Martina]

Had to read the description to understand, but short and sweet. Thumbs up.

[Talkativeted]

I like this poem. it is short and suit and made me smile. Well done.

[Liz]

I liked this. I think it showed a nice story in a short and simple way. The flow seemed just a bit off to me though. When I read it, it seemed a little choppy. But other than that, really nice work :)

[Detective Watts]

Nice, short and simple. I have to admit though, I had no idea what it was about until I read the description.