-Fall-

autumn

-Fall-

 

Submitted: Nov 14, 2009 Reads: 60           

The leaves are lying, like the trees have been crying.

Not just any tears but a profusion of fears.

Although they have been given up upon, their new

life has just begun.

The leaves now rustle and bustle like never before,

taking new flight from the cold winds of November.

Colorfull and bright, although having taken leave from

the mother of their birth, the leaves have already sur-

rendered to the susurrations of the night.

 

 

 

Atton Brown

nice. simple and it paints a nice picture

Posted: Nov 24, 2009

Author Comment:

Thank you mucho. I'll be over to see your stuff.
enjoy

Elne

I really like it, Nice rythm =)

Posted: Nov 25, 2009

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting Elne, I do appreaciate it.

hmirassou
(not registered user)

Incredibly beautiful! Your poetry leaves the story resonating in their hearts. Your flow is expert, your words are genius!

Heather

Posted: Nov 29, 2009

Author Comment:

Awsome review, thank you hmirassou! (hey, the rhymes keep comin) I'll be over to see ya!

Mistress of Word Play

A marvelous write. Love the imagery and the structure of the write. Wonderful job. Susan :)

Posted: Dec 4, 2009

Author Comment:

Thank you for the splendid words Susan
H.A.G.O.(have a good/great one)

tomwaldron

great poem. Masterful imagery.

Posted: Jan 3, 2010

Author Comment:

Thank you Tom.

 

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