TELL ME HIII

FAR THERE DOWN THE STREET

WITH THE BREAKING OF DAWN 

I'M WAITING FOR YOUR REPLY

PLEASE TURN YOUR FACE 

LOOK AT ME

SIMPLY SMILE AND TELL ME HIII

CONSIDER ME WHAT YOU CAN

BUT PLEASE DONT SHAPE A QUESTION OF WHY

WITH EACH GLIMPSE, EACH TOUCH 

TEARS FLOW DOWN THE CHEEKS THOSE ARE DRY

WITH EACH TEAR DERS A HOPE

THAT SOMEDAY YOU WILL TELL ME HII

Reviews

[ExquisiteEyes]

Unrequited love...its such a horrible thing.
A nice and emotional poem. Good job!

[nupur chauhan]

thanxx dear .. i appreciate ur appreciation for my poem

[ExquisiteEyes]

You're welsome :)

[AaronFreitas]

A nice emotional write nupur :) Sounds like this person just wants to be noticed and wants the attention from one person she longs for... even if it's just a simple hi. Nice work

[nupur chauhan]

thanxxx sir ..... for appreciating... a work on my own feelingss... :)

[zunie frost]

this is really great ... i love it !!!! i really like these first four lines !!!

[nupur chauhan]

thnxxx dear .. so much

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!