YES I STILL CRY

YES, I STILL CRY

I CRY IN HAPPINESS

I CRY IN PAIN

I CRY IN SORROW WHEN MEMORIES LEAVE BEHIND STAIN

ITS NOT MY WEAKNESS

ITS JUST A BLEND OF MY EMOTIONS

WHICH NEITHER NEEDED ANY CLUE 

NOR NEEDED ANY CONCLUSION

DARKNESS OF THE ROOM HIDES ME

WHEN TEARS FLOW DOWN MY CHEEKS

WITH EACH TEAR A NEW HOPE ARISES

TO CONSTRUCT A NEW GLIMPSE OUT OF SCATTERED BRICKS

Reviews

[Diamond]

Powerful and strong....and these lines sure had made you stronger.

[nupur chauhan]

thnk u .......................

[Ashish]

First of all I will say You look like "Veera" of star plus if u know what I am saying about

and next
I am not a professional writer nor a knowledgeable reader

but I Luv ur lines specially the last one..

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Enjoyed your poem! Beautifully expressed!

[nupur chauhan]

thanks for ur review..i worth it :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

It's my pleasure!

[nupur chauhan]

:) .............................................

[AaronFreitas]

"It's not my weakness, it's just a blend of my emotions." I love those lines and they are so true. I'm somewhat of an emotional person and I too cry. Sometimes it's not something extreme but just a blend of my emotions that just kind of allows myself to release and cry... it's therapeutic :)

[nupur chauhan]

thnks sir for ur appreciation ... m glad :)

[Jacob Clifford]

Everyone cries sometimes. The giant font in all caps were a little offsetting.

[nupur chauhan]

u r rite.... n i appreciate ur appreciation for my poem ... thanks dear :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Tears mean we are alive.
"ITS NOT MY WEAKNESS
ITS JUST A BLEND OF MY EMOTIONS"
Without knowing tears. We did not know love or living. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[nupur chauhan]

thanks for ur appreciation for my poem ... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[nupur chauhan]

:) ......................

[unfathomd]

"WITH EACH TEAR A NEW HOPE ARISES
TO CONSTRUCT A NEW GLIMPSE OUT OF SCATTERED BRICKS"
Now, that was cool :D Nice write :)

[nupur chauhan]

thanks unfathomd.... :) for ur appreciation dear