Quiet

Another poem about my niece

Overwhelmed by grief and disbelief

That you're Farewell Came So Suddenly

Tears Stream down my face

and after there's nothing left to say

I lay awake and wonder

This time there Was no Goodbye

Sleepless nights here I lye

,Quietly and all alone

,Your room stands, cold and Forgotten

i hope you Can Hear Me (X2)

All I Wanted Say Yesterday I'm Saying today

I hope you rest easy, Never waste your time in a quiet moment picking up momentum, i wish i had your courage... and know that i love you.

Overwhelmed By grief and Disbalief

That your farewell came so suddenly

i hope ypu can hear me

It's better late than never...

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

This is a vivid and powerful poem that radiates grief for what was lost. Very well written.

[Lori]

I love how each thought/emotion seems to collide into the next. It gives it a very "real" feel, as if we are going through this struggle to say goodbye with you.