The Deceiver

This love I seek

I have not found

a myth that is bleak

it serves to confound

Love, I think I find

but a deceiver, 

deceives my mind

makes me a believer,

not realizing i'm blind

I'm but a dreamer,

dreaming my wanted reality

it's so much serener,

than the reality I see

Awake I, more naiver

to Lust I awake,

In my bed, the Deceiver

a terrible mistake

another nonbeliever,

does Lust make

over love, another griever 

another heart, he breaks

Lust, the Deciever

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

The depth of this piece is just wow!!.. The way you have left your soul bared in your words . leaves me perplexed.Thats the quality of a writer i admire.I must say i am a fan of Romanticism too. :) But speaking about this i love the way you connected every trait -deceiver,dreamer,serener..... pardon me if i forgot any... An introspective piece .You have given me lot to think about today.. *thanks for sharing*

~Sophy

[Stephen]

Thanks for taking the time to appraise my work. Thanks for the good things you have said about my writing. I am glad that you liked it.

[Angad Waraich]

This is a really really intriguing piece.
I read it twice. Really well penned.

Well done.
Thank you for sharing.
Angad.

[Stephen]

Thanks for taking the time to appraise my work, friend. I appreciate the feedback.

[Angad Waraich]

You're most welcome.