A Merry Go Round Of Thoughts

A Merry Go Round Of Thoughts

In this mind, plays

thoughts on a merry go round

spinning fast, a haze

my mind spins it around

Reviews

[Moonie]

Thoughts are on a roar,
At the speed of light
they zoom past you
in a flurry of self-propulsion........... --just a little tribute poem for your piece.:)

[Stephen]

Thanks for the tribute. I like that. I appreciate you taking the time to read mine.

[Rene Salinas]

Oh I had re - written this so many times before I took it in. That's because I agree so much with the gesture shared here. Like a vortex of confusion constantly enveloping or doing, is it? is it not? shall i? maybe not? So many tendencies so many possibilities.

The intricacies of the mind ascending are limitless.

Intense felings.

Thank You

[Stephen]

Thanks so much for the appraisal and for taking the time to read my poem. Im glad that you can relate to it and get something out of it

[W R Stowe]

there you go put your mind back lol

[W R Stowe]

don't you mean spins it around.nice thoughts

[Stephen]

yeah, there you go, mind is little off tonight, that is why I wrote it in the first place. Thanksread moreyeah, there you go, mind is little off tonight, that is why I wrote it in the first place. Thanks

[W R Stowe]

thats ok if my head wasn't attached I would probably leave it somewhere Lol