The Clock

tick..tock..tick..tock, 
turn the gears of the clock. 
What will we do,
during the tick and the tock?

It’s how we spend,
The tick and the tock
That determines the end
When the clock stops
Tick..tock..tick..tock

Reviews

[merbear22]

This is a cool poem! It makes it seem like it holds a deeper meaning that you have to search for yourself.

[SyberRose]

As we get older the clock does tick faster...much too fast...cute poem. nicely done...Rose

[Stephen]

Thanks for reading. I appreciate your appraisal

[mattavelli]

That's cute. It can repeat nicely.
Line two, turns needs no "s".
Have fun

[Stephen]

thanks for the feedback. It was just something quick and simple. Im glad you liked it. feel free to appraise my other works. Im always open for criticism :)

[Caladoscope]

Well done, Stephen! Totally Sent me.....Tight.