Gazing upon the blanket

you see stars, in a moment breath is taken away...and you sigh

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her and i, at the fire we sat
gazing at the blanket, held
soft, attune to the musings
deft fingers touched, kissing
these soft petals belonging
as one constant blossom
what stemmed from the budding
union caressed, years  
aching breath, upon breeze
for with one another comes
time cherished hugging
denied for so long
when we did, burst
the glass of inhibitions
there is no wrong
taking right from deny    
to us side by side
staking our claim
that our intent
upon campgrounds, was
securely set
and thankfully sound

Reviews

[Jack...]

Beautiful, a blanket, the stars and love. Doesn't get any better than this.

[Souladareatease]

:) Thank You Jack much appreciated :)

[Sami Khalil]

"gazing at the blanket, held
soft, attune to the musings
deft fingers touched, kissing
these soft petals"
I love your latest writes . They are so touching and this is one of them...Well penned...:)

[Souladareatease]

I thank You so much Sami:) My mind has been terribly blocked lately for writes...so I thank You for saying that!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are humble. My pleasure...:)