Tornado Pass

Winds and seeing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sipping the crying ceiling
tomato-paste lips pucker pride
as Dale runs glad with his stash
so too Blue dances with Grey, washing
down the lane along overflowing streams
A tornado black skips the distance whipping
brought quiet then strolled to face the mountain
broke apart winded along the mountain sighed
while reeling in winds creatures loud once again
chirping and screaming safety softly reigning
they humor human by dancing steps delight
sifting seed peanuts and chi he laughs
canine and canines spread wide open
tasting drops beside innocent ears
She says the boat is leaving now
beat Heart sing forest and sea  
  


 

Author's Note

Feeling beings

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

When I want to get a beautiful and savory taste of nature, I always know where to look. Your hand is so steady when it comes to imagery of this kind; you truly do this amazing world that we live in justice with your words. I love the storm setting, also the underlying metaphor...so well done, as always.

[Souladareatease]

You are so kind Dear Friday...but I say again...This was NOT the read request---Brattius Maximus Reigns

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha But you know I always break the rules, so...

[Souladareatease]

Hmmmm such gifts...

[Sami Khalil]

"down the lane along overflowing streams
A tornado black skips the distance whipping
brought quiet then strolled to face the mountain
broke apart winded along the mountain sighed"
You writes are tornados of whirling beauty and then the calm after the devastating passions...:)

[Shaun Payton]

Hmm...Seeing peace after a storm..nature seems to have a way to remind us that all is well...but some choose to ignore or destroy parts of this wonderful amazing gift. Thats my take Soul.

[Souladareatease]

Indeed Nature and nature cleanses...when You live within it or travel through it...wiping what blackens or beats us down , helps us stay strong ... think and feel in open ways...Thank You Sir...cryptic is not always meant...it just comes out that way for certain ones Lol

[Shaun Payton]

Lol Ive never indeed it does Soul:) Cryptic hmmm Nah lol

[Souladareatease]

hahahaha:)

[Shaun Payton]

:) hehe