Morning Haiku

The word Haiku is used as a description of brief thought of scenery I encountered.

Frozen streets this morning
Brown leaves, crystal sparkling
Frozen streets; as I walk,
Frozen footsteps left by me.

Reviews

[Olivera]

Thank you all for such wonderful comments. You've swept me off my feet...

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

The last line..it was beautiful..it captured the essence of the poem.

[Robyn]

Nice imagery, the simplicity of it is refreshing.

[Angelic Darkness]

Another very good poem...simple, but still makes you feel
the coolness. You are a good writer:).

[closed]

Wow, Arlecchina, what beautiful artwork.

I guess you really are as much of a painter as you are a poetic artist. This is really good.

And your poem compliments it so too. It holds a dream like quantiy, all its own.

great work

-Dream

[Yaooooooo]

Very well written..
Keep up the good wrok and feel free to send me a request...
Thanks for sharing,
One!