Gothic Mind

Fortune absence

Makes me cold.

Shallow people

Must I speak?

 

Holding pebbles

White and thick

Shallow fire

Does not warm. 

 

The Truth...

Always different.

Pleasant Air

Icy breezing.

 

What to do?

Knowing not.

Standing silent

Graciously.

 

And there is nothing left…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Simplicity]

It has great imagery, and it's captivating. Awesome piece.

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I feel this both abstract and captivating, I like this very much.

[Jane Doe]

This is another great poem. I really enjoyed reading it!

[Kitty]

This is a great piece of writing.

Nicely written!!!!

Josie

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Firstly, I was drawn in from the title... I was not disappointed. I really enjoyed the 'gothicness' of this peice. beautiful. nicely done.


Great write.
Rayne

[Kris Tate]

Lonely very lonely imagery. I really like this. It like the saying of feeling alone in a room full of people

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a poem that speaks and makes one feel...

[RareRed]

Great imagary!!!

[Belle Morte]

The shallow pools of thought were never deep enough for me to really dive in and swim. The imagery and flow to this is really excellent. I enjoyed it. Great write. Keep up the good work.

[closed]

interesting.

It's hard to say for sure just yet....but I think you may possess the most unique poetic style that I've seen so far. I really liked this one, the way it flows.

Like the still warm heart beating on a shallow winter's night, it speaks to the one holding it. +-+