Gift Note

A Poem by Olivera

Ice light bubbles

From the North; flowing circles

Back and forth.

© 2008 Olivera

Author's Note

This is really gift note, for my best friend's birthday present on March, 17th

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Sparrow

Lol, it's funny that she saw snowflakes and I saw bubbles but either way beautiful description, the flow and rhythm was stunning, a first in the haiku genre that I've seen. I'm very impressed!

Good luck in the True Talent contest, I'll be announcing winners shortly!

Sparrow

Posted 17 Years Ago

Brianna Brie

It sounds beautiful. I am assuming it is about snow. Thank you for sharing with us in the Birthday Haiku contest.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 12, 2008
Last Updated on June 18, 2008

Author

Olivera

Belgrade, Serbia

About

My art work inspires my writing and vise versa. I consider haiku as very challenging poetic form and became quite attached to it since it gives me the opportunity of putting together observations i.. more..