always the same

this poems about a part of my life that i share with one other

here we go once again

are you my lover or my friend

round and round 

we always go

head in sky

heart in hand

love on mind 

rain falls deeper

clouds get darker

heart sinks lower

but round and round

we continue to go...

Author's Note

ignore any mistakes grammar or spelling

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I've read this again. I would like to recommend it BUT it needs editing. It deserves more reviews.
Where are the capitals and punctuations ?
This is a powerful piece of writing.
Very well done.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I like the staccato fashion of this little poem.
Well done.