Verge

On the verge of tears...

Verge

 

Waterfall inhibitions

Spiraling in a maelstrom

And as undefined thoughts glide

Violently,

Like birds in the ocean

The gates are about to open

And I am about to disperse

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Very nice.. this is a nice verse full of life.. nice

[PaleWriter]

Very nicely done. The comparisons between the vulnerable ocean and tears of emotion were exquisitly done in this poem. I liked it alot.

[Jola]

beautiful metaphors that inspire the imagination .... nice poem
although short ...
Greetings Jola

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

i love the simplicity & the amazing imagery of this. this captures the moment before the perging of tears perfectly. great write.