SIlence is her love

The people she used to talk to ... all gone
She lives most of her day in silence
She became comfortable with silence
She got addicted to silence
no one exists anymore
puts her ear phones on, plays her music, and walks
She doesn't know where she's walking to
It all became a sick routine
life became a routine
She has no control
She's not the same girl three years ago
Did you say Bye?
She created a person who has yet to be discovered
Catch her if you can.

Author's Note

This is one of the Poems I have written. I am not very good but I still enjoy writing poems and short stories. I hope to get good feedback from reviewers as how to improve my writing. Thank you!

Reviews

[New Theory]

She created a person who is yet to be discovered, instead of has.

Rest its a well written poem about what loneliness has made of people. Well you are not lonely here in writerscafe. We welcome you here and keep writing. :)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much for your feedback and welcoming me to writerscafe! :)

[New Theory]

you are welcome.. :)