Daring Dessert

A Succulent Desire

Filled with wildness fire. 

Tame it down, with devotion 

Devour my peddle like flower. 

Don't be hasty, 

Like fine wine, Time

decides such taste 

as mine. 

Reviews

[Saddam]

Full with sensuality and creating some image in mind.
Love this.

[Mescaline Butterfly]

damn that was sexy.
How sensual and soft, yet seductive and suggestive.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Short and sensuous.
Delightful perspective.
Love the image created.
Thank you,
----- Eagle Cruagh

[TheOne&Only]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Your very welcome.

[closed]

good wordplay with this
a great build up leading into a really good finish

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you!! Im glad you thought so

[closed]

youre welcome

[sinNsincerity]

I enjoyed how the words perfectly rubbed off each other. One of your best works hon. Great job.

[TheOne&Only]

Aww thank you Sin!! Thanks for reading, I always appreciate your reviews!

[AaronFreitas]

A very sexy write my friend :) Awesome work!

[TheOne&Only]

Sexy is my thing ;) haha thanks for reading!

[AaronFreitas]

haha I will keep that in mind my friend ;)

[Echoes of Eros]

Sensual and sweet words that ignite the flames of endless wildfires. xo

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so.