Psychosis

Trapped by the 'Feelings' of your memories.

Dark, on vended knees. 

Nothingness surrounds, 

My deep, scarred soul. 

Silence from afar,

to the trickle sounds 

of despair. 

Lightly puddled beneath

my bottom bare.

Begging & pleading

For the pain to subside.

Let there be light, 

in this dark room of fright!

I go unheard.

Not seen. 

But felt. 

Evil has an appetite. 

A fine taste 

to little souls.

That reek of fear, 

upon devilish nights. 

Reviews

[siobhan]

When you start talking about appetite I really understood. Great read, great poem. Best wishes

[Harley Sapphire]

"Let there be light/ in this dark room of fright!" I loved that line - beautifully written. The whole poem is beautifully written. The beat made it easy to read, and the message makes me want to read it again and again.

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you for your review, It means a lot, ..especially because this poem has so much meaning to me! I am glad you enjoyed it!

[Harley Sapphire]

No problem! Thank you for the great read!

[Anonymous -]

very well written , could feel the pain and torment in it, well done.

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you :) I appreciate your review.

[Ralph Rosell]

Well written! great choice of words for this dark themed poem ''Evil has an appetite"! Really nice!

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you very much!! I appreciate your time and review!

[closed]

very macabre

a devilish singe to the soul


-Dream

[TheOne&Only]

why, thank you!

[Lyingwithlions]

Powerful peice. Full of raw emotion. I really liked this peice! The things that
scar our souls can definitely grow stronger if fed.

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you!! I appreciate the review.

[JMKane117]

I really love dark writing like this. It all escalated perfectly. Nice work.

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!! :)

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome perfectly descriptive write :)
"Evil has an appetite.
A fine taste
to little souls.
That reek of fear,
upon devilish nights. "
I love the way that all feeds into your emotions... you penned it as perfect as can be. :)

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you Aaron!! Im glad you thought so! :)

[KittyKatgirl]

This is really good. I enjoyed reading this keep up the great work :)

[TheOne&Only]

Thank you! I appreciate your review!