Passing Glance

Brilliant blueberry blue   it is,
and smeared with white,
as is with light;
the sky today,
optic delight.

Reviews

[Isabel25]

OOhhh....love the word play and the hue-play (There is no such term, I know).

Beautiful imagery here, I could actually visualise the optic splendour u have mentioned here. So much detail just from a passing glance- brilliant!

[Chase]

Thank you very much Annie!! It is our jobs as writers to create new words and phrases. Always, there is room for new and quirk terms!

I appreciate the feedback very much:) I was at work when I wrote this. Every day I cover up the time clock so that the shift goes by faster. Just a piece of paper is dull... so I always write a little note on it. This one happened to be about the color of the sky when I glanced out the window. I liked it so I decided to keep it! Thank you again for the feedback :)

[Isabel25]

Well, it is wonderful how such little things get conjured up into such beautiful words, like little pieces of candy.
I really like this one!

[Chase]

I very much agree with you and appreciate the feedback! Thank you :)