Honest H2O

The gentleness of my soft touch
will lull you all to sleep,
yet im capable of massive change
as carving canyons deep.

Drop a pebble in the sea and
all will be alright,
but should a million fall at once
I'm quite a frightful sight.

Reviews

[Natasha]

This actually sounds kind of like a dark lullaby. I was hearing eerie music in the background as I was reading it. I really love the line "drop a pebble in the sea and all will be alright." I'm honestly still trying to figure out this poem- I've read it a few times already!

[Chase]

I first saw the picture and thought "who is that..?" XD its pretty! Im glad you enjoyed this piece. I thought it was pretty straightforward.. just picture the things im describing! Its firsr person as if water could have a voice.

[Natasha]

haha, i'm sneaky like that, changing it up.....i am probably over-analyzing this like i do most things

[Chase]

I belive you are. Its a very simple poem, but a powerful one, in my opinion. No hidden agendas. What you see is what you get.

[Emily]

I really like it!
Well done!!