Bees That Are Not Bees

They buzz within me
Pushing about and
Trying desperately in vain
To force their way out

These bees

Reviews

[Anna]

I believe we all have our struggles. Sometimes they seem to be just passing things, and other times, it seems we cannot get them out or away. I may have interpreted this wrong, but lovely representation nonetheless.

[Chase]

This was a short poem about my anxiety and how it feels inside me.. alwasy pushing pushing pushing. I just took a bio midterm and even though its over and I did well... I can still feel that anxiety pushing out from within. It is very physical, like the movie AVP where the little alien spawn force their way out of the chests of the human hosts.

[Anna]

I understand. I agree, and often feel that way as well. Beautiful write.

[Chase]

Thank you again Anna. You're so very kind about my writing :)

[Anna]

It's my pleasure.

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
I really liked it!
Keep it up!