My Day

I felt very serene.. very one with myself; and so was born this piece.

This is my day.

 

The sun is out

and shining on my cheek.

 

Warm.

 

The breeze blows by

and greets the sun.

 

Chilled.

 

My mind at peace

with all the world.

 

This is my day.

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

Optimism is contagious and how wonderful it is to be inspired by our Universe
Content to just be
Every day Your day
Great piece

[Chase]

Thank you very much Priscilla. Our greatest inspiration should be from ourselves and what surrounds us, I think. So this piece is a home hitter for me.

[Priscilla Sayers]

As it should be
Beautiful

[Kayle Ann]

I like this alot, actually. I don't really read alot of poetry, but I think this is very flow-y and rhythm-y. Very good:)