Purgatory

You know, it was a really s****y night and I only spent two minutes on this but it helped a little.

Another night has come to pass.
It went about just like the last;
alone at home with none to hold
as frozen shut my heart,
stone cold,

with naught to do but freeze.

Reviews

[Moonie]

I feel that the title really helps to pull the whole theme together, and to help the reader milk meaning from this short poem.

[Chase]

Most writers just slap on a title but i take time to find one that fits well with a piece. This one fits perfectly, and you are correct. It pulls it all together. Thank you for the review.