*CRACK*

It flies forth, an extension of myself
and strikes the air   as it were to make a rift
in the loop of time:

If only    to strike again.

Reviews

[Natasha]

"loop of time" and "extension of myself" were my favorite lines/words from this poem. I don't have much to say about this, as it is always excellently written. You could almost expand on this in some way in a story or something.

[Coral Fang]

strike the air
make rifts
all in the loop of time
the dreamer strikes again