"Why Again"

Once again, bitter and jaded

How much pain can one guy take?

Why again must i forsake

The life i've built, the peace i've gained?

A fire's burning in my brain.

A growing darkness, a quiet fear,

Like winters bite that lasts all year.

A Numbing burn, a gnawing ache,

Why again this toll i take?

It must be me, i must admit,

I really am a piece of s**t.

A secret villian, a worthless fake,

Why again must i partake,

In questioning my very worth?

I want to slip right off this earth.

To disappear, to go away,

Why again for death i pray?

Why not now? Theres nothing left,

Cuz i have failed lifes every test.

I guess i aint got what it takes.

Why again my heart must break?

 

(its just art people, i don't really want to die!!)

Reviews

[Ashley]

I absolutely love it! And I write like that too and I don't really want to die either!

[V. Lucien Maier]

excellent peice, great flow. Wonderfully done!

[Sara]

Well Im glad you dont really feel that way! :-)
I like this piece, it's easy to follow and the rhyming is awesome.

[Yaooooooo]

Why again this toll i take?
It must be me, i must admit,
I really am a piece of s**t.
A secret villian, a worthless fake,
Why again must i partake,
In questioning my very worth?
I want to slip right off this earth.
To disappear, to go away,
Why again for death i pray?
Why not now? Theres nothing left,
Cuz i have failed lifes every test.

Wow, i really like that part and I know what you mean about it been just art. I get people asking me if im alright all the time, and tell me how sorry they feel for my lost or my heart brake. I'm really good in the head, at least i think so. I'm not suffering from depression or want to put an end to my life but my poetry says otherwise. I like to write about dark things, death, and heart brake i think is commond, and things that people dont dare to speak about. Is become taboo, and i like to brake the boundrys of life, i like to brake the rules and go that extra step.
Thanks for sharing it was exelent, (I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER) LOL.
Just Joking with you, i really hope to read more like it in the future, feel free to send me a request anytime.
One!

[Valorie J. Shearer]

Yes, I feel you on this! We write about dying and leaving this earth, being afraid of dying yet afraid of living as well! I get it.. Nicely written, and laying it all out there fot everyone to feel!!! take care~~~

[John Parker]

I like your poetry.....I like seeing the dark side of stuff come out in writers......keep it coming......

[Robert Luna]

I liked the flow of this. The pattern reminded me of water flowing seamless and so purposeful. You have a strong sense of wonderment. Show scenes of life and placing yourself it would seem into your words themselves.


Well Done!!!!!!