"Nameless"

My name is Pain,

My name is Anger,

My name is Wrath,

My name is Danger,

My name is Malice,

My name is Sorrow,

My name is things wont get better tommorow.

 

My name is Violence,

My name is Screaming,

My name is Writhing,

My name is Bleeding,

My name is Victim,

My name is Villian,

My name is ashes and bodies and killing.

 

My name is Fear,

My name is Hate,

My name is Evil,

My name is Rape,

My name is scars,

My name is Death,

My name is nothing, nothing is left.

Reviews

[Pinky]

looks kinda like self reflection...idk...good job!

[Leah Maldonado]

hhmmm, it was a very negative poem, but that was probably intended....it was interesting, and it flowed well. The repition worked well.
Leah