Summer Heat

Summer Heat

Summer sun brings heat

Grasses and flowers quiver

Begging for the rain

 

Girls bake in the sun

They want to tan, but they burn

Hot sun brings them pain

 

Enjoy the sun now

Winter snows are on their way

Then you'll be freezing

 

 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very nice hokku. The summer has been hot here as well.

[deeps]

Got me to chuckle here
no one is ever happy about the weather.
I like this

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku String

[Jordan]

This is good. Its true too lol! Nice.


~Jordan

[Anastasia Starlena]

So true yesterday I went outside on my porch in my chair and the sun just felt so warm and refreshing. Great piece.