late night thoughts

I categorized it as a poem even though I'm literally just writing my feelings. I guess my thoughts are jumbled and poetic enough

love is such a powerful emotion. and when I saw you I was instantly drawn to you in what i could only describe as love. because your laugh filled the room and your eyes brightened the gloomy winter skies raging outside and in my heart. it's been a year since I fell apart and yet waiting for you was somewhat of a lifetime. I would wait it a million times just to see your face. I would bring you the moon dusted with stars on a silver platter. for you, darling, I would stay up all night to say good morning right when I saw the sun (or when I saw your smile, because they're the same thing). and I know I'm miles and miles away and the thought makes your heart break, but my god will I love you until the moon falls down, and the glistening snow turns black.

Author's Note

I always write in lower case. Also I'm sorry for this what the heck I hate love.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Love it...your eyes brightened up the gloomy winter skys - that was a fantastic line.

And so was the moon and the star line - beautiful words

What a great piece to read. Whoever else reads this i think will feel the same.

Mark.