i wish

just started writing and this is what i got

i wish i could see 

if i were blind  

wish i could hear 

if i was deaf 

i wish i could live this life 

without loosing one whole step 

but ive seen crazier 

ive seen down and out 

ive seen miracles 

where 

the breath comes out  

so we must hold our ground 

and let the world levitate 

we must look into the future 

and find the past at the gate

Author's Note

just want to hear your thoughts

Reviews

[Britny_ Grady]

Interesting, though you may want to try writing it in Stanzas... it would make it easier to read if you did.

[Adrien Hupp]

i like it although you should put it into stanzas, just saying:D but it's great!