see thru

well this is short and sweet but it seems like it flows pretty good

were sittin down with the cellophane 

so flimsy now with the see thru pain 

its closing in no time to stain 

our lives with hurt and emotional rain 

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[vido.]

with the exception of the improper grammer, which remotely throws you off, it was simple, precise, and interesting.