Saving Steps

save your steps 

we need to walk 

to heaven we go

the drummer boy stops

save your steps 

the past is gone

walk to the future

we must live on

save your steps 

the living collides

when we need to walk

we will open our eyes

save your steps 

this light is dim

the gate is open

please let me in

Author's Note

please let me know what you think, to me it seems like there is something missing?

Reviews

[Adrien Hupp]

i think that it is a great poem. but what is it about? good job:)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i think its nice just as it is, it leaves the reader with something to think about. i always like it when the reader is given some blanks to fill in with their imagination.