setting sun

Simply soothing setting sun

Take my heart and start to run

Through the valleys 

And the pathless woods

Never ending beauty 

Can not be fooled

Follow your heart 

It will take you far

The falling leaves will hide the scars

And as you look at the sky so dear

The endless nights will fight the fear

My heart it beats with the sky so blue

The setting sun has led me here

Led me here to you

© 2016 oursong2

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April Christina

This is beautiful This is beautiful Rating /100

Michael G.

This is a good piece. Keep at it. This is a good piece. Keep at it. Rating /100

Hotwater

Very sweet, a lovely poem it makes things seem very easy. Regards. Very sweet, a lovely poem it makes things seem very easy. Regards. Rating /100

Aleyah

wonderful flow! I love the wording and the emotional effects...the first stanza is beautiful, the second, liberating, and the third, beautiful as well. nice piece :) wonderful flow! I love the wording and the emotional effects...the first stanza is beautiful, the second, liberating, and the third, beautiful as well. nice piece :) Rating /100

Neva Flores Smith - Cha..

beautifully written and oh so comforting beautifully written and oh so comforting Rating /100

HopelesslyDevoted

wow, breathtaking! wow, breathtaking! Rating /100

Reviews

[April Christina]

This is beautiful

[Michael G.]

This is a good piece. Keep at it.

[Hotwater]

Very sweet, a lovely poem it makes things seem very easy.
Regards.

[Aleyah]

wonderful flow! I love the wording and the emotional effects...the first stanza is beautiful, the second, liberating, and the third, beautiful as well. nice piece :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautifully written and oh so comforting

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, breathtaking!