This life

there's a calmness 

there's peace 

in this life that we live 

with our mind and our hearts 

with our passion we give 

we walk and we run 

we fall and we stand 

we laugh and we cry

 we sink and we swim 

we may never get there 

but we will never stop trying 

in this life that we live 

we feel like were flying 

in this life that we love 

we will never stop fighting 

Reviews

[Michael G.]

I like the content and the thought of this poem. I realize you aren't worried about punctuation and such things... but it would flow better if you added some. Also, try removing the word "that" whenever possible.
Enjoyed it, at any rate. Good luck with your writing.