Curses Can Be Sweet

Relationships get old then when there over they're replaced by loneliness.

 

you thought that i loved you

but i guess you were wrong

i was just getting tired

of the same old song

 

it never ended

it played the same tune

over and over

until i thought i was doomed

 

i thought it wouldnt stop

i thought it wouldnt quit

so finally it was time

for me to end it

 

yes...it did stop

but it gets so much worse

it was replaced by a violin

and now i am cursed

Reviews

[C.L. Wilson]

why does it seem that the only ones i read are your depressing ones about break ups?

well anyways..... I think that you should be more clear on what the old tune was like and it confused me a little too at the ending but if you do as i just said than you should have a really good poem.

[Richy]

and now the depressing one -.-'

this one is also good. though confusing yes, but who says the reader has to understand. Usually poems are for the author to express feelings and lets face it feelings are horrible confusing at times.

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This kind of confused me at the end but other than that I really liked it. If it was a break-up note to someone, it would definatly be a harsh one. But it stands to a good point that people don't always like the same thing and try to mix it up. The only problem with that, is sometimes the mixing is worse then the same thing.

Good job.